Follow Your Passion: A Seamless Tumblr Journey
i kid you not i think i’m supposed to feel touched and i truly am but the heartburn bit that popped up like two times killed me instantly. i think another way the ending could’ve went (in a much more dramatic way) would be like:
chapter 2 epilogue:
shinobu: well, that was something. my smile feels a lot lighter now.
heart: wow that was nice, lemme just- (*cue romantic bgm*) skip a beat~ (*romantic bgm gets louder*)
shinobu: *oh…i….*(*romantic bgm slowly builds up until-*)
shinobu: oh i think i have tachycardia (ps: bear with me i think this was an actually pretty recently discovered illness back then but feel free to correct me) i have to do something i think i have- (*romantic bgm slowly turns into a train of mixed up medicinal jargon that nobody but shinobu will never comprehend*)
giyu: (*in the distance*) wow is she okay or smth
@demonslayedher you might never see this but your fic is going along great soo keep it up i love your work (like your other fics and aus) and your tumblr :)