#jesus Fucking Christ #them Quads Would Crush Me And I'd Die Happy #i Need To Be Sedated

#jesus fucking christ #them quads would crush me and I'd die happy #i need to be sedated

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10 months ago

found an old post from like 5 years ago saying 'I know I'm straight but wouldn't say no to a gay experience' and girl do I have some news for you LMAO

#gayawakening

Found An Old Post From Like 5 Years Ago Saying 'I Know I'm Straight But Wouldn't Say No To A Gay Experience'

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6 months ago

lord the peasants are so loud today

11 months ago
I Had To Make That Leyendecker Painting But Gay

I had to make that Leyendecker painting but gay

9 months ago

you can pry starting sentences with 'and' or 'but' out of my cold, dead hands

10 months ago

this is amazing

(cr) My Girlfriend Asked Me To Draw This For Them So I Obliged

(cr) my girlfriend asked me to draw this for them so i obliged

5 months ago

uhm

Uhm

oh my fucking GOD???

11 months ago

you haven't experienced desperation until it's 3am and you're on the last page on ao3 search page, read the last fic there is about your favorite ship and descend into madness because there is not enough content out there to satisfy your obsession so you walk around with this unexplainable big hole inside your chest until you find your next hyperfixation...

#help


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5 months ago

Show, don’t tell

"Show, don’t tell" means letting readers experience a story through actions, senses, and dialogue instead of outright explaining things. Here are some practical tips to achieve that:

1. Use Sensory Details

Tell: "The room was cold."

Show: "Her breath puffed in faint clouds, and she shivered as frost clung to the edges of the window."

Tell: "He was scared."

Show: "His hands trembled, and his heart thudded so loudly he was sure they could hear it too."

2. Focus on Actions

Tell: "She was angry."

Show: "She slammed the mug onto the counter, coffee sloshing over the rim as her jaw clenched."

Tell: "He was exhausted."

Show: "He stumbled through the door, collapsing onto the couch without even bothering to remove his shoes."

3. Use Dialogue

What characters say and how they say it can reveal their emotions, intentions, or traits.

Tell: "She was worried about the storm."

Show: "Do you think it'll reach us?" she asked, her voice tight, her fingers twisting the hem of her shirt.

4. Show Internal Conflict Through Thoughts or Reactions

Tell: "He was jealous of his friend."

Show: "As his friend held up the trophy, he forced a smile, swallowing the bitter lump rising in his throat."

5. Describe the Environment to Reflect Mood

Use the setting to mirror or hint at emotions or themes.

Tell: "The town was eerie."

Show: "Empty streets stretched into the mist, and the only sound was the faint creak of a weathered sign swinging in the wind."

6. Let Readers Infer Through Context

Give enough clues for the reader to piece things together without spelling it out.

Tell: "The man was a thief."

Show: "He moved through the crowd, fingers brushing pockets, his hand darting away with a glint of gold."

7. Use Subtext in Interactions

What’s left unsaid can reveal as much as what’s spoken.

Tell: "They were uncomfortable around each other."

Show: "He avoided her eyes, pretending to study the painting on the wall. She smoothed her dress for the third time, her fingers fumbling with the hem."

8. Compare to Relatable Experiences

Use metaphors, similes, or comparisons to make an emotion or situation vivid.

Tell: "The mountain was huge."

Show: "The mountain loomed above them, its peak disappearing into the clouds, as if it pierced the heavens."

Practice Example:

Tell: "The village had been destroyed by the fire."

Show: "Charred beams jutted from the rubble like broken ribs, the acrid smell of ash lingering in the air. A child's shoe lay half-buried in the soot, its leather curled from the heat."

3 years ago

Do non-americans realize that the United States is literally just a bunch of countries in a trench coat that agreed to be semi-nice to each other in order to sneak into the Big Boy Club? Because let’s be honest that’s just what the USA is

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