When You Are Writing A Story And Refer To A Character By A Physical Trait, Occupation, Age, Or Any Other

When you are writing a story and refer to a character by a physical trait, occupation, age, or any other attribute, rather than that character’s name, you are bringing the reader’s attention to that particular attribute. That can be used quite effectively to help your reader to focus on key details with just a few words. However, if the fact that the character is “the blond,” “the magician,” “the older woman,” etc. is not relevant to that moment in the story, this will only distract the reader from the purpose of the scene. 

If your only reason for referring to a character this way is to avoid using his or her name or a pronoun too much, don’t do it. You’re fixing a problem that actually isn’t one. Just go ahead and use the name or pronoun again. It’ll be good.

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6 years ago

You're god damn right.

To add to that if Hell is real we kill the fucker responsible for putting it there and doing our damndest (ha!) to free all the unfortunate fucks in it. Punishments should ALWAYS fit the crime. Eternal suffering should only be dealt to those whose crimes are eternal and the only fucker thst deserves thst is the shitheel that made Hell a thing and kept it running.

I don't give a fuck if it is God assuming it exists. The fucker who did it should die at any costs and their reign of terror ended.

full offense telling children, especially children too young to understand complex issues (under ten years old), that they’re going to hell is abusive and you’re an asshole

5 years ago

Hypnosis/Mind Control Dialogue Prompts

- “I feel…so weird…”

- “You are my slave.”

- “My head! It hurts!”

- “You are mindless.”

- “I can’t make it stop!”

- “Don’t try to resist it.”

- “Get out of my head!”

- “You can’t look away.”

- “I don’t know them at all…”

- “Call me your master.”

- “I obey you. Only you…”

- “You’ll remember nothing.”

- “What are you doing to me…?”

- “Your eyes feel so, so heavy.”

- “My friends…mean nothing…”

- “All you really want is to sleep.”

- “Please…please stop, just let me go…”

- “That’s it…Going deeper and deeper.”

- “All you can hear is the sound of my voice.”

- “Surrendering feels so very good, doesn’t it?”

6 years ago

I... don't see why you'd think otherwise? Both are equally awesome

REBLOG IF YOU THINK FANFIC IS JUST AS IMPORTANT IN A FANDOM AS FANART

6 years ago

Quoted for truth

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support fic writers! 

source: @ AgentMayViolet on Twitter! 

5 years ago
“Ghost Times” Grand Finale!
“Ghost Times” Grand Finale!
“Ghost Times” Grand Finale!
“Ghost Times” Grand Finale!
“Ghost Times” Grand Finale!
“Ghost Times” Grand Finale!

“Ghost Times” Grand Finale!

Pokémon Tale 33 “The Little Ghost” splendidly illustrated by Aya Kusube (1998) Enjoooooy!

6 years ago

Same~ ^-^

Reblog if you want your inbox filled with hypnosis stuff, anywhere from pics to gifs to spirals to videos and more!!!

Cuz believe me, I know I do

6 years ago

QFT

no but really, like 

i know that some folks love telling creative people that “you should be doing it for fun because you love it not for the compliments” but creative people thrive on feedback whether it’s critical or just complimentary

so when i write fanfiction and don’t get any actual feedback i feel like i spent all that time and energy doing it for nothing because i’m not getting feedback from the people i wrote it for 

doing something you’re proud of and then presenting it to the sound of utter silence is like the worst feeling on earth 

6 years ago

I'd love to talk with anyone interested on kik. Anyone who wants to experience trance and meets my requirements is perfectly free to kik me. Feel free to pm me on here or on kik with your answers to my questions below yeah? My kik is paradoxicmind

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6 years ago

Same~ Stare into the endless Abyss

Reblog this if it's ok for people to send you pics of themselves mindlessly staring at your blog.

Please!

5 years ago

Dear teen girls,

Stop abusing your boyfriends and yes what you are doing is abuse.

Stop:

Yelling at him in front of his friends 

Hitting or slapping him when he does or says something you don’t like

Telling him he doesn’t have a choice when it comes to decisions that involve both of you 

Telling him he can’t hang out with friends because you don’t like him

Telling him to not talk to other girls even if they are his friend

Forcing him to spend every moment with you 

Belittling him and pointing out all his flaws

Calling him stupid or making fun of him for making a mistake

Threatening to break up with him if he doesn’t do what you want

Being emotionally manipulative and crying until he does what you want

Accusing him of cheating every time he’s not with you

Blow up is phone if he doesn’t text you every five minutes 

Telling him you are the must thing that has ever happened to him and no one else will love

Physically attacking him when ever you are mad

Forcing him to have sex despite that fact that he said he didn’t want to

Invading his privacy by going through his phone

Getting mad at him for changing his password and demanding he tell you what it is

If a guy did any of these things to a girl it would be considered abuse but since its the other way around its considered normal. Throughout High school I saw many girl treating their boyfriends like shit. Sometime even physically abusing them in the hallways and no one trying to stop it because its a girl attacking a boy. 

Boys: If your girlfriend does anything on this list leave her. It is abuse and you deserve better.

Girls: if you find your self doing anything on this list to your boyfriend you need to knock it off because you are being abusive. 

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Welcome to the Abyss

The abyss of hypnosis can be used for many a activity. Any males who are interested in it may contact me via PM, leave your name, age, reddit/discord and what you would like to experience. I am perfectly willing to accept hypno slaves if that's what you're into, almost nothing is our of bounds so feel free to ask for anything.

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